100 Word Challenge

This weeks 100wc is antibullying.  This is what one pupil from Tanfield Lea Community Primary wrote:

Once,there was a little girl called charlie.One stormy day at the park she started to walk home whn a bunch of teenage girls started to annoy her and trip her over.When she got home she ran all the way up the stairs to her bedroom she looked at her knees and her hand they were coverd in blood she didnt want show her mam or dad.The next day her mam got her dressed whe she saw the marks she was devestated she said "who did this" charlie replied "these teenagers" when her mam found the teenagers in park she told them off and then the teens said sorry and promised not to do it again
 
What can you come up with in only 100 words?

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  1. I came up with:
    Once there was a little kitten called Kinney. He was loved the least. He had the least fur and his brothers were half the size of him. Kinney was always kicked out any fun family games. One day a few months later he tried to stand up to his little brothers and sisters but all he did was starting a big fight! That night he couldn’t fall asleep his mother saw him hurt and bruised. She talked with Kinney. In the morning she had a talk with the other kittens and now they all work and play together forever.

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    1. Well done Jade an excellent story in just 100 words!

      Miss Gallagher

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